Two Deaths

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That day I died two deaths, one when I was told my unborn child was no more, second when I saw you heave a sigh of relief knowing it was a girl!

My first try at one liner fiction. Feedback eagerly awaited.

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  1. Divya SrinivasanMarch 28, 2016 at 8:04 PM

    Strongly conveyed Nidhi. Well done.

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    1. nidhiMarch 28, 2016 at 10:13 PM

      Thanks divya....as a first timer your feedback encourages me.

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  2. Jyotirmoy SarkarMarch 28, 2016 at 10:16 PM

    just mind blowing thought.

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    1. nidhiMarch 28, 2016 at 11:38 PM

      Thanks.... Mind blowing truth of today's Indian society

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  3. Ila VarmaMarch 28, 2016 at 11:26 PM

    too good as first timer, concise & assertive.

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  4. Sunshine-struckMarch 29, 2016 at 7:33 PM

    Oops, very heart touching! Loved the way you put it across! :)

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  5. @ngel ~March 29, 2016 at 10:10 PM

    Superb !

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  6. The Solitary WriterMarch 30, 2016 at 9:51 AM

    A lot said in few words! Thats the art of writing! Brilliant Writing.

    The Solitary Writer

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    1. nidhiMarch 30, 2016 at 3:16 PM

      thanks for the appreciation. Its not the words that value its the emotions that seep into them. Most of the times when you really need to express I believe you don't even need words.

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  7. PrachiSeptember 11, 2020 at 4:02 PM

    A small love story of mom and her offspring. The emotions stays wit mom forever.
    Very realistic in today's hypocrite society

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    1. nidhiSeptember 11, 2020 at 6:14 PM

      Thanks a lot Prachi. Fiction always reflect society's truth

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  8. UnknownSeptember 11, 2020 at 4:15 PM

    Superb... Nycly conveyed

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  9. UnknownSeptember 11, 2020 at 4:20 PM

    A strong message in 2 lines. Loved it. Superb👌🏻

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    1. nidhiSeptember 11, 2020 at 6:13 PM

      Thanks...sometimes words are not important feelings are

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