Two Deaths





That day I died two deaths, one when I was told my unborn child was no more, second when I saw you heave a sigh of relief knowing it was a girl!

My first try at one liner fiction. Feedback eagerly awaited.

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  1. Strongly conveyed Nidhi. Well done.

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    1. Thanks divya....as a first timer your feedback encourages me.

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    1. Thanks.... Mind blowing truth of today's Indian society

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  3. too good as first timer, concise & assertive.

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  4. Oops, very heart touching! Loved the way you put it across! :)

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  5. A lot said in few words! Thats the art of writing! Brilliant Writing.

    The Solitary Writer

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    1. thanks for the appreciation. Its not the words that value its the emotions that seep into them. Most of the times when you really need to express I believe you don't even need words.

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  6. A small love story of mom and her offspring. The emotions stays wit mom forever.
    Very realistic in today's hypocrite society

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    1. Thanks a lot Prachi. Fiction always reflect society's truth

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  7. A strong message in 2 lines. Loved it. Superb👌🏻

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    1. Thanks...sometimes words are not important feelings are

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